The unforgettable moment in my life is when I went to Mecca and Madinah. This was become unforgettable moment because first reason is when me and my father went to the department store after maghrib prayer. We borrowed a sandals without the owners permission. Then I said to my father it’s okay if we wore that sandals? Then my father said it’s okay we just borrowed not taken it. A few minute after that we returned a sandals on the same place. Then we prayed isya at Harom mosque. And do you know, when we want to come back to the hotel. We were missing our sandals. I thought that maybe this happened because we wore that sandals without permission. So , we decided to go to hotel without sandals. Suddenly a mother and her son asked me “where was your sandal?” I said that it was lost. Then she said wait a minute, five minute later she was brought a couple of sandals and gave it to us. This is the great experience that I ever had. Another reason is when I prayed maghrib in Nabawi mosque. There was a little girl her name is Nawabi. She gave me a beautiful necklace. At first I refused it, but she said please accepted. It was for you. So I received it, until now I still save it in my room. That’s all about my unforgettable moment in my life.
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I am very interest in your story, Ai..!
BalasHapusThat's true that action = reaction.
I do believe it...
It's wonderful experience, and it's described nicely in ur writing. It's good u also state ur TS and CS. U also already tried 2 use the transition signal though it isn't effective yet. U hafta make ur supporting sentences more organized, so the readers will be more interested reading ur writing. There a other important points u have 2 consider too. First, dealing with the grammar and its consistency. Next is about the rule of reported speech. U write direct quotation (taken from ur genuine conversation) without putting any punctuation then. Some of ur sentences categorized into run on sentence. Please be aware of those two aspect I mentioned. Interesting topic for sure:-)
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